The path

I am writing another story! THis one is called the path. It is all about a boy who works in the fields with his father. Then something happens one night. Let me show you a couple of sentences.

Xander ate his undercooked steak and then went into his room. Then he felt a rufh og cold air. He looked at his window and there was a shadowy figure with a bag of arrows strung across his back and a sword at his waist. The figure was wearing a black cloak.
Thanks... :p